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Ok so I write poetry and here are a few of my faves that ive written so thought I'd share them with you guys. I like criticism if you have any to give. I have shared these 3 poems with some of my long time guilds in the past simply because I love them so much.


My Halo

My Halo's broke,
Now I'm soaked,
With anger and impurity.
You've no idea the severity.
But here I am,
Trying to stand,
And make my wrongs all right.
The anger that was feeding me,
Was killing me,
Now I see.
But here I stand,
With Halo in hand,
Trying to put it together again.


Yes, I know the next one has no punctuation, I generally don't punctuate my poems and find it difficult to figure out where all the punctuation should go for it to be proper and keep the poem flowing.


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Another time
Another rhyme
Another place to run and hide
Another poem to confide
The secrets that I keep
The secrets for which I weep
That I can only bear
In a rhyme can I only share
And tell you how I feel
And hope you'll see it's real
And maybe you already see
What this is suppose to be
Nothing compares to you
An understatement for your hue
Can't remember when I last felt
A person who made me melt
Like you
And now I'm a little blue
Because I already know
Of the flow
Of the truth
You need to soothe
You need some space
To find your place
And this I know is true
So until the time
I can change this rhyme
I'll never forget
The best time yet
So if forever is not in me
A friend I'll always be
So until the time
That I can change this rhyme
You can bet
It was the best time yet


Yet again another un punctuated one.


God

Finding my way back to you
Back to the place that I am true
Thought I was right, but realized wrong
Decided to change the tune of my song
Once was lost, but now I am found
My feet are finally on the ground
My face and hands touch the sky
No longer needing to ask you why
Sorry for the way I treated you
I'd come back you always knew
Please forgive what I've done and said
I no longer see in shades of red
The glory in you I now accept
You washed me clean with the tears I've wept
Back to the Mother, Father and Sons
Into you I'll always run


I generally write new poetry on a weekly basis and everything I write is personal and related to my life or whats going on around me closely. Hope those who read them get some enjoyment or entertainment from them or something lol. If any seems interested in reading any more maybe I'll post some more

Jade

Very nice.

I am somewhat of a writer as well, it's nice to know that the English language isn't totally dead due to "texting" and the Internet vernaculars in use with today's youth.

Drakiis, where is your part time lover Crim at? He usually has some kind of input on things like this.

He says he ain't got time for gaming lately, and that MMO's in general are not worth his time, last known location of this individual has been Dragon Age, thank you for accessing the Drakiis Central Gaming Database...

i like!